Familial Polyposis More Condition_symptoms Roler Writing Workshop Exercise 4

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While dark sorcerers perform their rituals, under the somber gaze of the old idols, the warriors dance and celebrate to their hearts full of courage. It's time for truce and are in a sacred place, united by the revival of a common enemy, but distrust preying on their hearts. CH -

Noruba: This is a coalition of black tribes who occupy the vast plains of Zhul. They are united by a common culture and customs, although not rare fighting each other for territorial reasons. Have a reputation for fierce and savage warriors. Members are trained from childhood in the arts of fighting and violence. -

Kuroi: Keep the flame of civilizationtion. They are the only ones who still live in cities, although they are almost in ruins. They are not soldiers but soldiers, but priests do not have warlocks. When they go into battle wearing bronze armor and heavy metal spears and shields.

- Wakai: They are a race of strong men natives of a remote archipelago, which settled in small coastal villages. Bold sailors, often adorned with colorful tattoos and although it is usually displayed calm not angry.

- Gheera: A village formed exclusively by women warriors. They live in the jungle, the ruins of abandoned cities. Are the other bastion of civilization in these lands but are feuding with Kuroi. Possess mystical ties with the cats of the jungle, which run alongside them as pets.

- Zekali: Mysterious Dwarfs who live in swampy areas dxt, makes the reader go making a mental image of his "character types" and read in comfort. The biggest hit is that I can put the selected text has not permitted you to practice writing too "immersive" in the atmosphere as you develop in the first paragraph, which I also liked. Courage and forth with the next installment.

The fact is that in my first version of the page tribes were presented briefly in the paragraph in italics and then developed in the rest. Maybe I should have continued with the style up instead of making a